Please help me to choose a Japanese translator!

Hello, guys. You already know that I blew previous Japanese translation (as well as Chinese which was generously proof-readed and re-translated by Indienova later). I still can't afford big names such kakenashigames so I'd like you to help me to evaluate freelancers whom I gave a little test.

Please, judge their translations and let me know which one is good. Thank you!

https://steamcommunity.com/app/846110/discussions/0/1728701877525133113/